Correção de texto: The Malibu maven Francesca Aiello

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Fashion forward boho-chic beach babes across the globe have long been inspired by the ultimate bikini babe – Malibu maven Francesca Aiello and her brand Frankie’s Bikinis. And with Independence day around the corner, the quintessential beachwear brand has released its latest looks from its USA Baby collection. The latest styles in reds, whites, and blues have us singing the praises of this ultra chic swimwear label, as endless dreamlike crochet fabrics create one-pieces and bikinis ideal for party hopping and holiday beach jaunts. We’re suckers for cute one suits. The Poppy one piece in particular, with a crochet mid-section and a cheeky fit, has us seeing stars!

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The Malibu maven Francesca Aiello and her brand Frankie's Bikini have inspired beach girls around the world. With the approach of Independence day, this brand has released its newest looks from its USA baby collection. We're very attracted by the latest styles in reds, whites and blues of the amazing, incredible swimmwear label. Endless crochet fabrics create one-pieces and bikinis perfect for parties and holidays. Cute one suits got us very amazed. With a crochet mid-section and a cheeky fit, the Poppy one piece in particular made us see stars.
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