Correção de texto: Beachgoers

Avatar do usuário Andrezzatkm 4810 1 8 105
The last months on the year require more atention of the beachgoers. It is on the high tide period that the firstaiders register higher numbers of rescue from the sea. A important issue to care is a consumtion of alcohol. Most cases, the victims had drunk alcohol and enterd the sea. It is a hug risk, even worse if you don't know the place and ignore the guidlines of the lifeguards, who many times become "invisible" from the eyes of the beachgoers, as they belieave to be out of danger.
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The last months in the year require more attention from the beachgoers. It is on the high tide period that the first aiders register the higher numbers of rescue from the sea. An important issue to care is a consumption of alcohol. Most cases, the victims had drunk alcohol and entered in the sea. It is a huge risk, even worse if you don't know the place and ignore the guidelines of the lifeguards, who many times become "invisible" from the eyes of the beachgoers, as they believe being out of danger.

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Avatar do usuário gian2hard 2270 1 7 50
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The last months of the year require more attention from beachgoers. It is during the high tide in this period that first aiders register the highest numbers of rescues from the sea. In most cases, alcohol consumption played an important role as the victims had been drinking alcohol just before entering the sea. Drinking and swimming is risky, and is aggravated if you don't know the place and ignore the lifeguards safety considerations, which in many occasions become "invisible" from the eyes of the beachgoers as they believe to be out of danger.

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