Correção de texto "my holidays"

In my holidays I'm going to travel to the beach, to the coast of Rio de Janeiro to be more specific. I'm going just relax and enjoy the beautiful sights of the seashore.In this season the people usually go to coast, then probably It is going to be full. But It is going to be good anyway. I'm going on December 29th.
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In my holidays I'm going to travel to the beach, to the coast of Rio de Janeiro to be more specific. I'm just going to relax and enjoy the beautiful sights of the seashore. In this season many people usually go to the coast. It is probably going to be full (or 'to be packed'), but good (or 'but fun') anyway. I'm going on December 29th.