Correção de texto: My oldest friend
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My oldest friend is named Luan. We met in the school, about 10 years ago when we were a little kids. Our friendship didn't arise an specific event, I believe that this friendship was natural. On the playground we stayed together at the same time and the same local and We had another friends to, all of the same classroom.
We were together nearly every day at school and on the weekends we played RPG with our friends, we were a group of 7 kids, some have older. At that moment we drank soda and ate some types of fast foods.
I went to university , but Luan decided study more to pass at Unicamp. Today I was graduated and working. Recently Luan succeeded pass at Unicamp, after 4 years without we see we met again to celebrate. We called all our friends.
Now we meet two times a month, we are to play RPG on the weekends with our oldest friends.
Thanks a lot
May you help me with the text below?
It have something wrong?
My oldest friend is named Luan. We met in the school, about 10 years ago when we were a little kids. Our friendship didn't arise an specific event, I believe that this friendship was natural. On the playground we stayed together at the same time and the same local and We had another friends to, all of the same classroom.
We were together nearly every day at school and on the weekends we played RPG with our friends, we were a group of 7 kids, some have older. At that moment we drank soda and ate some types of fast foods.
I went to university , but Luan decided study more to pass at Unicamp. Today I was graduated and working. Recently Luan succeeded pass at Unicamp, after 4 years without we see we met again to celebrate. We called all our friends.
Now we meet two times a month, we are to play RPG on the weekends with our oldest friends.
Thanks a lot
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