Correção de Texto: Techonolgys for learn more and quickly

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Every year are launched new gadgets like tablets, smartphones and ultrabooks and is common see many people staying days in line to buy one of them. Naturally, we can say that this new products are affecting our lives.

At universities and schools, many students are using these products instead of the book and pen that their parents had been using years ago. Now, a regular student uses an “iPad”, or an “Ultrabook” to make their notes in classes, study and read their books. This change is affecting the way they’re learning because, with the internet, they can look for information at any moment and at any location. For example, an engineering student is at a math class. The professor is talking about a subject that have by reference one class that this student had done in the last period. It is normal the student do not remember everything so, with their tablet, he can access this information during the class and read about it. Therefore, the student will got the knowledge that he does not remember and can continue paying attention in what the professor is saying, without need to interrupt the class just for ask about something he does not remember.

Another example of the uses of technology for learn is that many people around the world are learning languages by themselves. We just need to “google” what we want to learn and there are many results and sites with we was looking for. This people figured out that they do not need to be in school to learn and the best part is that they can learn at any time and any moment.

As a result of the technology in the field of learn/study, now we have noticed some little changes in the way we get information. In the future, perhaps, we will see online schools for everyone. People won’t need to go somewhere to study. They’ll can study by their homes, learn faster and better than in the past because with just one click they have access to all knowledge in the world.


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Every year are launched new gadgets like tablets, smartphones and ultrabooks and is common see many people staying days in line to buy one of them. Naturally, we can say that this new products are affecting our lives.

At universities and schools, many students are using these products instead of the book and pen that their parents had been using years ago. Now, a regular student uses an “iPad”, or an “Ultrabook” to make their notes in classes, study and read their books. This change is affecting the way they’re learning because, with the internet, they can look for information at any moment and at any location. For example, an engineering student is at a math class. The professor is talking about a subject that have by reference one class that this student had done in the last period. It is normal the student do not remember everything so, with their tablet, he can access this information during the class and read about it. Therefore, the student will get the knowledge that he does not remember and can continue paying attention in what the professor is saying, without need to interrupt the class just for ask about something he does not remember.

Another example of the uses of technology to learn is that many people around the world are learning languages by themselves. We just need to “google” what we want to learn and there are many results and sites with we were looking for. This people figured out that they do not need to be in school to learn and the best part is that they can learn at any time and any moment.

As a result of the technology in the field of learn/study, now we have noticed some little changes in the way we get information. In the future, perhaps, we will see online schools for everyone. People won’t need to go somewhere to study. They’ll can study by their homes, learn faster and better than in the past because with just one click they have access to all knowledge in the world.
Avatar do usuário PPAULO 39205 6 32 684
Not to mention the heading/title.
I would redo that to "Technology to help students learn more, and in a quick way."
Others may come up with other suggestions, though. I only think that "techonologies" (that word was mispelled I am afraid), doensn´t go well with "technology" that you (correctly) mentioned in your text. Technology is the way to talk about it in general, unless you specified them. For example, computer technology, aviation (technology) and the education (technology) are technologies of our time.
PPAULO escreveu:Not to mention the heading/title.
I would redo that to "Technology to help students learn more, and in a quick way."
Others may come up with other suggestions, though. I only think that "techonologies" (that word was mispelled I am afraid), doensn´t go well with "technology" that you (correctly) mentioned in your text. Technology is the way to talk about it in general, unless you specified them. For example, computer technology, aviation (technology) and the education (technology) are technologies of our time.


PAULO, I really appreciated your feedback. Thanks!!

I'd like to say that I really wrote* in a wrong way "Techonolgys". That was a really bad mistake. Indeed you are correct. I should use "technologies" in the title.

In spite of it did you notice any problem in the text? I'm improving my grammar skills, which is my poor ability in English at this moment.

Again, thanks very much for your feedback.

Have a nice day ;)

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* Is "wrote" grammatically correct there? When I was writing this I stayed in doubt.
Avatar do usuário PPAULO 39205 6 32 684
Not technologies, here you are talking about thechnology in general, should you be describing several kinds of them, you could say "technologies". For example, the "The technologies of Education and communication that help students nowadays".

But don´t take my words for it, run a search on Google with the keywords "technologies to help learn" and you will see that the hits that come up are usually with "technology" (word in the singular, when it´s talking about in general). Examples:

How Technology Enhances Teaching and Learning.
Use of Technology in Teaching and Learning.
How technology can help improve education.



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And yes, you used "wrote" correctly, it was in the past and the word itself correct, so you got it right.
I appreciate that you wrote English with capital E, so you didn´t slip where many students would do.
Right now I am a bit swamped, but I will make a mental note to see your piece of text in its entirety. ;)
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Every year are launched new gadgets like such as tablets, smartphones and ultrabooks are released and is common to see many hundreds of people staying waiting in line for days to buy one of them buy the newly released version/get ahold of the newly released version. Naturally, we can say that this these new products gadgets are affecting our lives.

At universities and schools,many students are using these products instead of the book and pen students are replacing pen and paper thattheir parents had been using years ago. Now, a regular student uses an “iPad”, or an “Ultrabook” to make their take notes in class, study and even for reading books. This change is affecting the way they’re students are learning because with the internet with access to the internet, they can look up for information at any time and place. moment and at any location For example, an engineering student is at a attending a math class. The professor is talking about a subject that has by reference one class that this student had done attended last period. It is normal that students do not remember everything sobut, with tablet, they can are able to access this information during class. and read about it. Therefore, they will got have the required knowledge needed in order to that he does not remember and can continue paying attention in keep up with the pace of the classs, without the need to interrupt others just for to ask about something he does not remember for what is a trivial matter.

Another example of the uses of technology for learn in education is that many hundreds of people around the world are learning languages by themselves. We just need to “google” what we want to learn and there are many the results come right up. and sites with we was looking for. This People have figured out that they do not need to be in school to learn and the best part is that they can learn at any time and any moment.

As a result of the technology in the field of learn/study, now we have now noticed some little a few changes in the way we gether information due to the role technology plays in education/our society. In the not so far future, perhaps, we will see online schools for everyone. People won’t need togo somewhere leave their homes to study. They’ll can be able to study from their homes, learn faster and better than in the past because with just one click they have access to all the knowledge in the world.


Ello friend

I've changed quite a bit of your original text, it doesn't mean tho everything I've changed was wrong, I just think it reads a bit better this way.

One thing I noticed right away was your word order (Every year are launched new gadgets) "Every year new gadgets are launched" in English. Everything else was pretty good, few minor mistakes but pretty good indeed.
Avatar do usuário PPAULO 39205 6 32 684
Back to the title "Technology to learn more and quickly", another example ...way(s) to learn more and quickly...


What I mean is, using FOR it would require an ING form of the verb, not so with TO. And it´s more natural/used this way (with TO).