Wayward childs - Tradução em português

Hi folks,

Could you suggest me anything to improve the text in English bellow?


Veja,19 de maio de 2010.

Desobedientes ( Denis Russo)
Quando educamos nossas crianças apenas para serem obedientes, A chance de elas agirem com heroísmo quando a oportunidade aparecer é minúscula. Crianças boas são aquelas que. quando chega a hora de escolher entre o certo e errado, são capazes de desobedecer.

Waywards Children
When we educate ours children only so as to obey, the possibility of they act like heroes is little.
Good childs are able to disobey on the right time in order they choose between right and wrong.

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4 respostas
When we educate our children only to be as obedient as we want, the possibility of they act like heroes is little.
Good children are able to disobey when the right or the wrong is in front of them.
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Um pouco melhor.

When we educate our children only to be as obedient as we want, the possibility of they act like heroes is little.
Good children are able to disobey when the right and the wrong are in front of them.
Thomas 7 60 290
Disobedient Children ( Denis Russo)
When we raise our children to obey blindly, the likelihood they will act heroically when the opportunity arises is minuscule. Good children are those that, when the time comes to choose between right and wrong, are able to disobey.
Thank you very much, boys!