Correção de dedicatória em inglês de um livro - Parte 4

Aqui está a continuação do agradecimento. Obrigada pela ajuda! É muito importante para mim saber que estou conseguindo progredir no aprendizado do inglês.

André Voitilla: you were create when I´d went to school by bus. You´re not so surreal, because you came to life from a real person. Time passed by so fast and suddenly you half face desappeared. And I know that he won´t come back, but you will stay by my side forever! So, you´re a big story! you´re a smart thief! A thief of souls who doesn´t give up anyway! Thanks for now!

Dona Mabelle: You´re such a big woman(...or a big star!). You have the world in a palm of your hand. When a terrible war reachs all world, you hold and get everything! Save a soldier by a time, Mabelle! Barbosa needs you and I know you will work out perfectly! That´s all! Thank you very much!

Derquagot: You´re a part of me! There´s no doubt about it! You´re really my best friend and I value the friendship you given me. I forget the way you came to this world, but I think that a special person brings you back to me. That´s not a bad suggestion!
You´re a mystical character. Every part of you knows the Moon and the sky above us. Yeah, you´re a funny clown who gives to the world the best you can. Thanks for now!
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André Voitilla: you were created when I went to school by bus. You´re not so surreal, because you came to life from a real person. Time passed by so fast and suddenly your half face disappeared. And I know that he won´t come back, but you will stay by my side forever! So, you´re a big story! you´re a smart thief! A thief of souls who doesn´t give up anyway! Thanks for now!

Dona Mabelle: You´re such a big woman(...or a big star!). You have the whole world in your hands. When a terrible war reaches all the world, you hold and get everything! Save a soldier at a time, Mabelle! Barbosa needs you and I know you will work out perfectly! That´s all! Thank you very much!

Derquagot: You´re a part of me! There´s no doubt about it! You´re really my best friend and I value the friendship you've given me. I forget the way you came to this world, but I think that a special person brings you back to me. That´s not a bad suggestion!
You´re a mystical character. Every part of you knows the moon and the sky above us. Yeah, you´re a funny clown who gives the world the best you can. Thanks for now!