Correção de "I don't read the Anki app''

Olá pessoal, fiz um pequeno texto, o caminho até a fluência está difícil, mas espero conseguir e ajudar aqui no fórum também. Vamos lá, desde já agradeço.

I don't read the Anki app, and for this I don't remember any words; I just forget them. I think in only make review in some entire days. This form I don't forget the words. I study by Peppa Pig in youtube; is a serial for kids. I watch TedTalk too; and I read the book in English, but I read very slow. In my speed I will finish read the book in two years; literally.

I come back read the Interchange Collection; I think it will good for me. I learn new words, how "wasp" for example. I learn a beautiful phase: "Your life unfolds in proportion to your courage." It's a beautiful phase, isn't?

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Avatar do usuário Redseahorse 10700 1 14 213
Algumas sugestões de melhoria, de acordo com o que eu pude entender que é a sua intenção no texto:

I don't USE the Anki app, BECAUSE OF THAT I don't remember MANY words, I just forget them. I AM ONLY THINKING OF MAKING REVIEWS DURING some WHOLE days, this WAY I don't forget the words. I study by Peppa Pig ON youtube, IT is a SERIE for kids, I ALSO watch TedTalk and I AM READING A BOOK in English, but I AM DOING IT SLOWLY. AT my PACE I will finish READING IT in two years, CERTAINLY!

I RE-BEGAN READING the Interchange Collection, I think it will BE good for me. I learn new words, SUCH AS "wasp", for example. I HAVE LEARNED a beautiful PHRASE: "Your life unfolds in proportion to your courage", It's a beautiful PHRASE, isn't?

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Avatar do usuário PPAULO 46195 6 35 814
No doubt RedSeaHorse has made a spotless correction and proofreading. Couldn't have done it better myself!

007, keep up the good work. You are doing well in your league, there is room for improvement, but improving you are!