Correção de texto: Children's Day

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On November 5th 1924, a decree nº4867, stablish octuber 12th as the oficial date for celebrating the Children's Day in Brazil. However, only in 1955 the date started being celebrated due to a marketing campaign elaborated by a toy company. The sucess of the campaigh drew the attention of other businessmans associated with the toy industry. After that, they lunched a campaign called "children's week" with the intention of increase the sales. Then the Children's Day started to embrace the the celebrating days of Brazil.

(A origem do Dia das Crianças"; Brasil Escola.)

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On November 5th 1924, THE decree #4867, EstablishED OctOber 12th as the oFFicial date for celebrating Children's Day in Brazil. However, only in 1955 the date started being celebrated due to a marketing campaign LAUNCHED by a toy company. The sucess of the campaigN drew the attention of other businessmEN associated with the toy industry. After that, they INITIATED a campaign called "Children's Week" with the intention of increasING theIR sales. FROM THAT MOMENT ON, Children's Day started to BE CELEBRATED IN BRAZIL.
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The copy-paste betrayed you, huh? Copy-pasted sucess, I mean. He hee. Just kidding around. ;-)
Congrats on your corrections.
Not necessarily "betrayed". The thing is: I edited the text on my smartphone. I had to copy and paste...
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Don´t sweat it! You superbly polished the text, that is what counts. Congrats!