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Fences

A long time ago there was a big farm in a bucolic countryside city. The man who owned the farm was rather tall and had red hair.
Nobody liked the farmer because he was a very grumpy man and did not like to share nothing with the others, every reaping he took all the money to himself and let the others with nothing at all. Due to that, some other farmers of the little city decided that they would destroy that farm and do away with the 'tyranny' of the red-haired farmer.
And it did happen; It was a beautiful spring day in the city, the tall farmer was lunching alone in the porch when he saw two men climbing the walls and trying to enter his farm. But this was the moment when something very unexpected happened..
The farmer already knew he would be attacked and set electric fences on the top of the walls. The men were not expecting that and as they touched the fences they died and fell to the dirty and wetted ground.. After that day no one ever dared to cross the boundaries of the farm again...


Wrote it just to practice my writing. Doesn't make much sense at all haha ;)

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