Correção de texto "Rio de Janeiro - The hope never die"

I came across of the time looking the new Rio de Janeiro’s environment. The new roads like Transcarioca, also know as (aka) ligeirão. In 2013 the new line, I believe number four, Ipanema until Barra da Tijuca. Destruction of the Perimetral viaduct. The new roles for people cross Rio Branco and Presidente Vargas avenue (it’s very important to change people culture). New areas revitalized for homes or night clubs in downtown. New commercial buildings and services (restaurants or drugstores or Pets and etc.). All this fact and much more will come in 2012 until 2016.

Anything are flowers there are many problems related the violence or housing or areas drugs or traffic jam or public transport or cleaning of street or waste recycling or hospital or education and etc. There are many works and for target this solve is necessary public finance resource. The new events will happen (The World Champion Soccer-2014 or Olympic Games-2016 or Confederations Cup-2013) and the new resource finance will come and Rio will have one to change for better or keep go in the same situations.

Better days for Rio and for us.
Luiz Cesar Viana
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I came across of the time looking the new Rio de Janeiro’s environment. The new roads like Transcarioca, also know as (aka) ligeirão. In 2013 the new line, I believe number four, from Ipanema to Barra da Tijuca. Destruction of the Perimetral viaduct. The new roles for people cross Rio Branco and Presidente Vargas avenue (it’s very important to change people's culture). New areas revitalized for homes or night clubs downtown. New commercial buildings and services (restaurants or drugstores or Pets and etc.). All this fact and much more will come in 2012 and last until 2016.

Anything are flowers there are many problems related to violence or housing or areas of drugs or traffic jam or public transport or cleaning of street or waste recycling or hospital or education and etc. There are many works and for target this solve is necessary public finance resource. The new events will happen (The World Champion Soccer-2014 or Olympic Games-2016 or Confederations Cup-2013) and the new resource finance will come and Rio will have one chance to change for the better or keep going in the same direction.
Tks, Donay.