Exercício: Fazer Redação em inglês

Donay Mendonça 60325 21 100 1457
Pessoal,

Passe o texto a seguir para o inglês e melhore a sua redação e habilidade em escrever no idioma.

A cidade dos sonhos é pequena e sempre há alguma coisa nova para se fazer. É um lugar bonito e as pessoas são sempre muito amigas. As coisas parecem estar dando certo e quase não há problemas, como roubos, violência e corrupção. O prefeito está fazendo um bom trabalho e todos estão satisfeitos com isto. Educação, saúde e segurança pública são prioridades.

Nos finais de semana, há muitos turistas de outras cidades, já que a cidade dos sonhos é um lugar muito bom para se divertir, descansar e fazer amigos. Há um rio limpo, uma praça maravilhosa e comida caseira deliciosa. E o melhor de tudo: tudo a um preço bastante acessível. Música é algo muito popular por aqui, há vários estilos: sertanejo, rock, samba, entre outros.

Se você estiver pensando em viajar nas férias, a cidade dos sonhos é o lugar ideal. Com toda certeza vale a pena. Você vai se divertir muito. Estamos aguardando sua visita.
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felipeh6 2255 7 56
The right place

City of dreams is small and there is always something new to do there. It's a beautiful place and people are always so friendly. Things seem to be working well and there are almost no problems like theft, violence and corruption. The mayor is doing a good job and everyone is pleased with that. Education, health and public security are the priorities.

On weekends, there are many tourists from other cities, because city of dreams is a very good place to have fun, relax and make friends. There is a clean river, a wonderful square and delicious homemade meals. And the best thing of all: prices are quite affordable. Music is very popular here, there are several styles: country music, rock, samba, among others.

If you are planning to do a vacation travel, city of dreams is the right place. It's surely worthy. You will enjoy it a lot. We are waiting your visit.

Donay Mendonça 60325 21 100 1457
Pessoal,

Uma das traduções possíveis.

The dream city is small and there's always something new to do. It is a beautiful place and people are always very friendly. Things seem to be going fine and there aren't many problems like robberies, violence and corruption. The mayor is doing a good job and everyone is happy with it. Education, health care and public security are priorities.

On weekends, there are a lot of tourists from other cities,as the dream city is a great place to have fun, relax and make friends. There's a clean river, an amazing square and tasty homemade food. And the best of all: everything is really affordable. Music is very popular around here and there are many styles: country, rock and roll, samba and so on.

If you're thinking about traveling on your vacation, the dream city is the ideal place. It is definitely worth it. You'll have a lot of fun. We're looking forward to your visit.


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Douglas2000 240 6
The city of dreams is small and there’s always something new to be done. It’s a beautiful place and people are always very friendly. The things look to be going right and there isn’t almost no problems, such as robbery, violence and corruption. The mayor is doing a good job and all the people are satisfied with this. Education, health and public safety are priorities.

On weekends, there’s a lot of tourists from other cities, as the city of dreams is a very good place to have fun, get some rest and make friends. There is a clean river, a wonderful square and delicious homemade food. And the best of all: everything at a so affordable price. Music is something very popular around here. There’s many styles: rock, samba, country, among others.

If you are thinking about traveling on vacation, the city of dreams is the right / ideal place. I am sure it is worth it. You will have a blast! We’re waiting for your visit.

Cristina Navarro
The dream city is smal and there is always anything new to do.
It's a beautiful place and people are very friendly. Things seems to be good and there is almost no problems, like robbery, violence and corruption.
The Mayor is doing a good job and everybody are good with it. Education, health and public security are priorities.
On the weekends, there are turists from other cities, as the cities of dreams is a pretty good place to have fun, rest and make friends.
There is a clean river, a wonderful square and delicious homemade cuisine. And best of all, everything with a very accessible prices.
Music is something very popular here.
There is lots of styles: country, rock, samba, among others.
If you're thinking about traveling on vacation, dream city is an ideal place. It is worth for sure. You'll have great fun times. We're waiting for your visit.

iamrcr 300 5
The dream city is small and there's also something new to do. It's a beautiful place and people are always very friendly. Things seem to be doing fine and there's almost no problems, such as thefts, violence and corruption. The mayor has been doing a good work and everyone is satisfied with this. Education, health and public safety are priorities.

On weekends, there's a lot of tourists from other cities, since the dream city is a good place to have fun, take a break and make friends. There's a clean river, a wonderful ( praça ? ) and delicious "homebrew dishes" ( chutei bonito ). And the best of all: everything for a acessible price. Music is something very popular over here, there are many styles: "country" ( que não é bem sertanejo ), rock, samba, among other ones.

If you're thinking about travelling on vacation, the dream city is the ideal place. With all surety ( chute ) it's worth it. You'll have a lot of fun. We'll be waiting for your visit.

Agora, com ajuda do google:
praça = square ( Tianmen Square, Hollywood squares, etc. sabia mas não sabia que sabia )
comida caseira = home cooking ( nunca adivinharia )
sertanejo = pensando de novo, eu deixaria "sertanejo", mesmo.
with all surety = nem precisou do google, vou colocar "for sure"

Agora revisado:

The dream city is small and there's also something new to do. It's a beautiful place and people are always very friendly. Things seem to be doing fine and there's almost no problems, such as thefts, violence and corruption. The mayor has been doing a good work and everyone is satisfied with this. Education, health and public safety are priorities.

On weekends, there's a lot of tourists from other cities, since the dream city is a good place to have fun, take a break and make friends. There's a clean river, a wonderful square and delicious home cooking. And the best of all: everything for a acessible price. Music is something very popular over here, there are many styles: sertanejo, rock, samba, among other ones.

If you're thinking about travelling on vacation, the dream city is the ideal place. It's worth it for sure. You'll have a lot of fun. We'll be waiting for your visit.
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9LeonardoRamos 10
The dreams city is small and constantly there is new things to do. It is a beautiful place and the people are always very friendly. The things seems to be going right and almost there isn’t problems, as theft, violence and corruption. The major is doing a good work and everybody is satisfacted with it. Education, health and security are priorities.
In the weekends, there’s a lot of tourists from another cities, once the Dreams City is a very good place to have fun, rest and make friends. There is a clean river, a marvelous square and delicious homemade food. And the best of all: everything has a very accessible price. Music is something very popular here, there is various genders: sertanejo, rock, samba, between others.
If you’re thinking to travel in vacation, the Dreams City is the ideal place. Sure it’ll worth. You will have a lot of fun. We are waiting your visit.

biokiko
The dream city is a small city and always with something new to do. Its a beautiful place with friendly people. Things seem to be on the right track and there is almost no problems such as theft, violence and corruption. The mayor is doing a good work and everyone seems satisfied with this. Education, health and public security are priority.

In weekends, a lot of tourists from another cities, since the dream city its a wonderfull place to have fun, rest and make new friends. There's a clean river, a marvelous square and delicious homemade food. The best of all: affordable prices. Music its something very popular here, with a lot of styles: sertanejo, rock, samba, and so on.

If you are planning a trip on your next vacation , the city of dreams is the best place. Certainly worth the effort. You will have a lot of fun. We are waiting for you.

Marina de Souza
Dream city is small and has always something new to do. It is a beautiful place and people are very friendly. Things seem to be doing well there and there is almost no problem as robberies, violence and corruption. The mayor is doing a good job and everybody is satisfied with it. Education, healthy care and public safety are priorities.

At weekends, there are lots of tourists from other cities, because dream city is a great place to have fun, rest and make friends. There is a clean river, a wonderful square and tasty homemade food. And the best of all: Everything is low cost. Music is something very popular here, there are many stiles: country, rock, samba, and so on.

If you are thinking about travel on holidays, dream city is the ideal place for you to go. It really worth it. You will have lot of fun. We are looking forward for your visit.

gabihcalixto
The dream city is small and there's always something new to do. It's a beautiful place and people are always very friendly. Things seem to be going right and there aren't many problems like theft, violence and corruption. The mayor is doing a good job and everyone is pleased with that. Education, health and public security are priorities.

On weekends, have many tourists from other cities, because dream city is a great place to have fun, relax and make friends. There's a clean river, a wonderful square and a delicious homemade food. And the best of all: everything is really affordable cost. Music is very popular around here, there're many style: country music, rock, samba, among others.

If you are thinking about traveling on vacation, dream city is the ideal place. It's definitely worth it. You will enjoy it a lot. We are waiting for your visit.

Regina Aziz
The city of dreams is small and there's always something new to do. It's a beautiful place and people are very friendly. Things look like they've been working out and there's almost no problems, like thiefs, violence and corruption. The mayor is doing a great job and everyone is pleased with it. Education, health and public security are priorities.
  In weekends, there are a lot of turists of other towns, since the city of dreams its a good place to have fun, chill out and make friends. There is a clean river, an wonderfull park and a delicious homemade food. And the best of all: everything at a very reasonable price. Music is something very popular here, there are plenty of styles: sertanejo, rock, samba, among anothers.

If you are thinking about traveling on vacation, the city of dreams is the ideal place. Am sure its worth it, you are going to enjoy a lot. We are waiting for your visit.

Ricardo F. Bernardi 11495 19 233
Is is just my audio record.
I'd appreciate if someone evaluate my pronounciation.

Thanks in advance.

Ricardo.
Donay Mendonça escreveu:Pessoal,

Passe o texto a seguir para o inglês e melhore a sua redação e habilidade em escrever no idioma.

A cidade dos sonhos é pequena e sempre há alguma coisa nova para se fazer. É um lugar bonito e as pessoas são sempre muito amigas. As coisas parecem estar dando certo e quase não há problemas, como roubos, violência e corrupção. O prefeito está fazendo um bom trabalho e todos estão satisfeitos com isto. Educação, saúde e segurança pública são prioridades.

Nos finais de semama, há muitos turistas de outras cidades, já que a cidade dos sonhos é um lugar muito bom para se divertir, descansar e fazer amigos. Há um rio limpo, uma praça maravilhosa e comida caseira deliciosa. E o melhor de tudo: tudo a um preço bastante acessível. Música é algo muito popular por aqui, há vários estilos: sertanejo, rock, samba, entre outros.

Se você estiver pensando em viajar nas férias, a cidade dos sonhos é o lugar ideal. Com toda certeza vale a pena. Você vai se divertir muito. Estamos aguardando sua visita.
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PPAULO 54135 6 43 973
You did great Ricardo, even though I am not the best adviser when it comes to listening (or for that matter to speaking). But even so, I could understand your talking well.
One thing that "caught my ear" the very moment I listened to it, was the part "and the best of all" (if I really caugth the right words), I would expected "and best of all". But, overall, you did remarkably well.
Others may have some further comments and ideas to improve it or may disagree with me, so let´s wait for them, the experts.

Cinnamon 17395 15 51 400
Well done Ricardo!

Excellent from my point of view. Clear and natural. Great control of Portuguese interference.

The only problem is the accent -

"American English..."

Kidding lol

PPAULO 54135 6 43 973
Oops! A little correction here:
I would expect (not expected)..., my bad!

And Cinnamon, I think 98 out 100 would like the American accent over the British one (kidding too, and exageratting here) :-) However, in Brazil we get more in touch with that brand of English, whereas the people in Europe, Africa, Middle West are more acquainted with the British one.
It´s just a comment, to explain why it likely came in Ame. English, sort of.

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