Correção de texto: An experience that led to a faith

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An experience that led to a faith

He had to get a fligh at 9AM, but everything seemed to be against him. First, the alarm clock didn't work and he got up very late. Next, he couldn't find his ticket in any place. So, he decided to get a new one at the airport. In the way to the airport, the cab got its tire flat and he completed the path on foot. When he arrived at the airport and thought he would got the flight on time, he realized he forgot his passport at home. Back at home, he turned the TV on and couldn't believe what he saw on the news. The plane he would fly fell down few minutes after takeoff and all passengers on board died.
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Correções (negrito) e outras sugestões de aprimoramento (itálico):

A faith-building experience

He was supposed to board a flight at 9AM, but everything seemed to be going against him. To start with, the alarm clock didn't go off and he woke up very late (to wake up = acordar / to get up = levantar). To make matters worse, he couldn't find his ticket anywhere, so he decided to buy a new one at the airport. On the way there, the cab had a flat tire and he had to walk the rest of the way. When he arrived at the airport, he thought he would be able to get on the flight on time, but realized he had left his passport at home. Back at home, he turned the TV on and couldn't believe what he saw on the news. The plane he would fly on (1) crashed (2) a few minutes after takeoff and all passengers on board died.

1) To fly a plane = Pilotar um avião / To fly on a plane = Viajar em um avião.

2) O verbo "cair" no contexto de acidentes aéreos é normalmente traduzido como "to crash". "To fall" e "to fall down" não são opções naturais para transmitir esta ideia em inglês.

Bons estudos.