Correção de texto "Drinking and driving"

Brazil has the heaviest zero tolerance Law for drinking and driving, valid all over national territory. It is different of USA where the law varies but all states have some kind of penalties.

In spite of the fact that Lei Seca (Dry Law) to seem so heavy , many car accident have been going on with young from 18 to 25 years old.

The popular take on drinking and driving is most of think It is a great law even though they do not take it serious because have been drinking and driving.

To Lei Seca be effective, the government should invest in scare educational advertising. Perhaps showing the dead victims of accident would raise awareness for no drinking and driving.

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Avatar do usuário Marcio_Farias 12430 1 22 210
My one-line suggestion:

"... tolerance law for drinking and driving, good in continental Brazil. Laws are different in the USA where they vary ..." ou
"... In the USA states have their own costumary penalties for drinking and driving."
Avatar do usuário Marcio_Farias 12430 1 22 210
A propósito, existe post semelhante aqui.
Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 52245 21 84 1223
Algumas sugestões de correção:

Brazil has the most strict zero tolerance Law for drinking and driving, valid all over national territory. It is different from USA where the law varies but all states have some kind of penalties.

In spite of the fact that Lei Seca (Dry Law) to seems so strict , many car accidents have been happening to young people from 18 to 25 years old.

The popular take on drinking and driving is most of think It is a great law even though they do not take it seriously because have been drinking and driving.

For Lei Seca to be effective, the government should invest in scare educational advertising. Perhaps showing the dead victims of accident would raise awareness for no drinking and driving.