Correção de texto para iniciante

Olá pessoal, estudei um pouco essa semana, sou iniciante, e resolvi escrever um texto.
Gostaria de receber a correção, principalmente pra saber onde melhorar.

I would like so much that I could stop the time every minute that you stay here, mainly a minutes with me. The need for stay in your presence becomes every time more involuntary and each day that we spend, I feel that we took less that we can do. Nothing is enough, I wanted live more than 3 years in 3 months. In the last 4 years, I spent my parties with you, I saw you every week. This will be the 6 longest months of my life, and I sure, my year after july, will be the shorter year ever, for after, I Will have more 6 months of torture. I believe so much in us, I believe too in our future. We are made to stay together, and the world show that yes, for this it so hard to think in you with other people that not me, and for me, is more weird yet think to have other people that not you. I don’t want anyone else in my good memories, you are my past, my present, and my future.