Correção de texto: Shakespeare
- Gabi_S
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Shakespeare was born in 23 of April of 1564 to the south of England.
He was one of the writers most important of literature, being recognized for Romeu and julieta and Hamlet in which it has the most famous phrase “to be or not to be, here it is the question. ”
Some writers doubt until today were themselves same Shakespeare who wrote history for having a vast knowledge of words at that time. It died young with 52 years, but thus its parts had exactly had a great recognition and until they are staged in the entire world.
He was one of the writers most important of literature, being recognized for Romeu and julieta and Hamlet in which it has the most famous phrase “to be or not to be, here it is the question. ”
Some writers doubt until today were themselves same Shakespeare who wrote history for having a vast knowledge of words at that time. It died young with 52 years, but thus its parts had exactly had a great recognition and until they are staged in the entire world.
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- Luis Larisch
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Oi gabi,
O texto ficou um pouco confuso então tive que tentar interpretar um pouco para fazer a correção.
Espero que seja a interpretação que você esperava.
O texto ficou um pouco confuso então tive que tentar interpretar um pouco para fazer a correção.
Espero que seja a interpretação que você esperava.
Abçs e bom aprendizado!Gabi_S escreveu:Shakespeare was born in 23 of April of 1564, toin the south of England.
He was one of the writers most important writers of literature(of all times). (Nada de errado mas apresenta um pouco de redundância, ele foi um dos escritores mais importantes da literatura, mas todo escritor faz parte da literatura, o que você poderia fazer é especificar ou que tipo de literatura ou em que período da literatura), being recognized for Romeu and julieta(Romeo and Juliet --> em inglês) and Hamlet, in which it, (there is)has the most famous phrase of all time/ever(não opcional..."The most famous" requer complemento) “to be or not to be, here it is the question.("to be or not to be that is the question" --> Essa é a frase em inglês) ”
Some writers doubt until today(this day) ....
were themselves same if Shakespeare himselfwho wrote those historyies for having a vast due to his vast knowledge of words at that time.
It(he) died young, with 52 years(aging 52)(relatively not, people at that time died a lot earlier then they do today), but thus(thus = portanto) his parts(plays --> Peças de teatro) had exactly a great recognition "were greatly recognized"/"receives great recognition till this day" and Are still until they are staged in the entire world.
- gian2hard
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due to his vast knowledge of words = due to his enormous vocabulary
wrote those histories = wrote those stories?
he died young, with 52 years = He died young, at the age of 52.
due to his vast knowledge of words = due to his enormous vocabulary
wrote those histories = wrote those stories?
he died young, with 52 years = He died young, at the age of 52.
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