Correção de texto: Shooting in the office.

It was a normal day in a normal office set in Los Angeles downtown. Everbody was working a lot, although they were sorta tired; You know, It is not easy to work like that, getting calls, writing reports and getting more calls. But that day, everyone was happy, they'd have a party at Juliana's house(Juliana was the boss secretary) later, they could not wait for that, It'd be awesome! So, when the boss said ''Let's call it day!'' They ran to the exit, However, as they were nearly there two men armed with knifes and guns entered in the office and led them back upstairs. They got all the money in there and said ''If you call the cops or do anything you'll die, your heard me? Y'all gonna die!'' But everybody was too scared to do something. They watched the thugs gettin' all the dough.
But, it was Juliana(The secretary who was going to throw the party) could get her mobile and called the cops, what the robbers told them NOT to do.
As the two man heard the sirens out there they said ''Are you kiddin' me? are you batty? It was in that moment he drew the boss and killed him, there was a big noise when the gun went off. Afterwards, the police arrived in the third floor and the shootout started. The policemen got success and were able to kill the punks. Nobody but the boss and the thugs died that night, all the workers were good after the shooting. But I think there wasn't any party after that

Obs: This story is not real, ok? haha It came from my mind.


Could you check my mistakes?