Correção de Textos: Coherence (Film)

Can someone review my text?
There is no spoilers about the movie.

"I would like suggest you to watch the Coherence. It is a 2013 Sci-fi thriller film that wasn't exhibited on Brazilian theaters, and this is why it is not much known here.
The plot is about four friend couples who go to a dinner party at the night that a comet is passing near from the earth, causing strangest phenomenons.
The film keep the audience's attention from the beggining to the end, just the finale was a little poor."

Thanks.

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Redseahorse 2 28 362
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" I would like TO suggest you to watch the Coherence. It is a 2013 Sci-fi thriller film that wasn't exhibited IN Brazilian theaters, and this is why it is not KNOWN HERE THAT MUCH.
The plot is about four friend couples, who go to a dinner party ON A night that a comet is passing near TO the earth AND IT´S causing THE strangest phenomenons.
The film KEEPS the audience's attention from the BEGINNING to the end, THOUGH ITS finale was a little poor. "
Cinnamon 15 61 498
Hi folks!

Apenas complementando.

Use phenomena in plural. It's a Greek word ending with an "a", such as the pair datum/data (singular and plural). ;)

check that here

Cheers!

:geek: ;)
PPAULO 6 47 1.1k
I would suggest "from beggining to end." instead of ''from the beggining to the end".
OEstudantedeIngles 2 16 113
Just another suggestion guys, that'd be ''There are no spoilers about the movie'' not ''There is no spoilers about the movie'' It's quite important,


Take care :)
PPAULO 6 47 1.1k
Yep, whale of a sense indeed.
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Thank you very much folks!
I think I learned something with your suggestions.
PPAULO 6 47 1.1k
I´m glad that it helped, that´s the spirit over here, and we (at least I speak for me - and many others I guess) learn a lot around here as well. :P
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