Correção de Textos: The Force Awakens

This week it will occurs the star wars first run, and all old and new fans are eager to see again the battle between jedis and siths.
The expectation about the movie is not little then let's hope we don't to let down like usually happen with sequels.
Personally my ticket is already bought and I can't wait to visit the galaxy far far away one more time.

Can someone review my writing, please?

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This week [will] occur the Star Wars first run, and all old and new fans are eager to see again the battle between Jedis and Siths.
The expectation about the movie is not little, then let's hope we don't [get] down like usually [happens] with sequels.
Personally, my ticket is already bought and I can't wait to visit the galaxy far far away one more time.

I think that's it.
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