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Do you know the LinkedIn? It is a business social network where you can have a professional profile and keep a list of networking contacts.
Lately I am using the LinkedIn more frequently than Facebook for example. I think it is more relevant and useful.
Maybe can it help you find a new job? Try it also.

Thanks.

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Do you know WHAT the LinkedIn IS? It is a business social network, where you can have a professional profile and keep a list of networking contacts.
Lately, I am using the LinkedIn more FREQUENT than Facebook, for example. I think it is more relevant and useful.
MAY IT help you find a new job? WELL, YOU SHOULD ALSO Try it !
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Do you know what the LinkedIn is? It is a business social network where you can have a build a professional profile and keep a list of networking contacts.
Lately, I am using the LinkedIn more frequently much more than Facebook for example. I think it is more relevant and useful.
Maybe can it help you find a new job? It may also help you find a new job. Try it also. So why not give it a try!

Thanks.
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