Correção de texto: Job description on Linkedin

Hi guys,

Could you review and correct my job description? I'm a Due Diligence Officer by the way. :)

''Onboarding of new clients in the context of global policies added to Brazilian regulation.
Adoption of several investigative measures, such as background checks and screening performed through specific tools and internationally recognized sites (Ofac, Factivia, World-check, Vigilance and Lynx) in order to analyze the risks in client relationships and identify whether the client can be considered a PEP, or if there is any negative news hit.
Working in partnership with the Compliance and Due Diligence teams from different countries.
Also responsible for the recertification process for existing clients, according to their risk.
Work closely with different areas in order to understand the clients profile and provide a valuable service.
Close partnership with the Compliance teams to ensure that the regulatory requirements are being met.''

Below my description in Portuguese:

''Onboarding de novos clientes no ambito de políticas globais somadas a regulamentação brasileira.
Adoção de diversas medidas investigativas, como backgrounds checks e screenings realizadas por meio de ferramentas específicas ou sites de reconhecimento internacional, a fim de analisar os riscos no relacionamento com o cliente, bem como identificar se cliente é pode ser considerado um PEP, ou se é encontrado algum indício de notícias negativas.
Trabalho em parceria com os times de Compliance e Due Diligence de diversos países.
Responsável também pelo processo de recertificação para clientes já existentes, de acordo com o seu risco.
Trabalho com estreita colaboração com diferentes áreas, a fim de entender o perfil do cliente e prestar um serviço valioso.
Estreita parceria com os times de Compliance para garantir que exigencias dos reguladores estão sendo cumpridas.''


THANK YOU!

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2 respostas
Dei uma atualizada na descrição:

''Onboarding of new clients in the context of global policies coupled with Brazilian regulation, performing the Client Due Diligence/KYC process. Adoption of several investigative measures, such as background checks and screening through specific tools and internationally recognized sites (Ofac, Factivia, World-check, Vigilance and Lynx) in order to evaluate risks of potential individuals/counterparties and identify whether the client or their beneficial owner can be considered a Politically Exposed Person (PEP).
Working in partnership with the Compliance and Due Diligence teams from different countries.
Also responsible for the recertification process for existing clients, according to their risk.
Provide services to our internal and external clients in all our interactions; work closely with different areas in order to understand the clients profile and provide a valuable service.
Close partnership with the Compliance teams to ensure that the regulatory requirements are being met.''
Donay Mendonça 22 102 1.5k
Sugestões:
''Onboarding of new clients in the context of global policies according to Brazilian regulations, performing the Client Due Diligence/KYC process. Adoption of several investigative measures, such as background checks and screening through specific tools and internationally recognized sites (Ofac, Factivia, World-check, Vigilance and Lynx) in order to evaluate risks of potential individuals/counterparties and identify whether the client or their beneficial owner can be considered a Politically Exposed Person (PEP).
Working in partnership with the Compliance and Due Diligence teams from different countries.
Also responsible for the recertification process for existing clients, according to their potential risk.
Provide services to our internal and external clients in all our interactions; work closely with different areas in order to understand clients' profiles and provide valuable service.
Close partnership with the Compliance teams to ensure that the regulatory requirements are being met.''
De uma forma geral, o texto está bom. No entanto, por se tratar de linguagem técnica/específica, pode haver diferenças, dependendo do país ou lugar onde o inglês é falado.

Bons estudos.
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