Correção do texto "Usefull cell phone" [en>en]
- draylson
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Usefull Cellphone
I’m impressed about how much usefull my cellphone has been for me. I think that the only functionality which I’ve been used is the clock. I avowed that I’m not used to make calls, but ever I need to make one I don’t have credits or the battery is uncharged.
Usefull Cellphone
I’m impressed about how much usefull my cellphone has been for me. I think that the only functionality which I’ve been used is the clock. I avowed that I’m not used to make calls, but ever I need to make one I don’t have credits or the battery is uncharged.
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- Donay Mendonça
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I’m impressed by how useful my cell phone has been for me. I think that the only function I’ve used is the clock. I confess that I’m not used to making calls, but every time I need to make one I either don’t have any credit or the battery is low.
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I’m impressed by how useful my cell phone has been for me. I think that the only function I’ve used is the clock. I confess that I’m not used to making calls, but every time I need to make one I either don’t have any credit or the battery is low.
- Flavia.lm
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I’m impressed by how useful my cell phone has been for me. I think that the only functionality which I’ve used is the clock. I confess that I’m not used to make calls, but every time I need to make one I don’t have credits or the battery is uncharged.
I’m impressed by how useful my cell phone has been for me. I think that the only functionality which I’ve used is the clock. I confess that I’m not used to make calls, but every time I need to make one I don’t have credits or the battery is uncharged.
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