Analise e reescreva a seguinte frase:
* Este trecho foi extraído de um texto, uma postagem acerca dos novos desafios profissionais esperados na nova posição (cargo), de perfil do Linkedin.
Reescreva a frase abaixo, de modo a, se você considerar necessário, torna-la menos informal, corrigindo também o desvio gramatical apresentado:
"I'm looking forward to all the challenges and learnings that await me in the next years to come"
Reescreva a frase abaixo, de modo a, se você considerar necessário, torna-la menos informal, corrigindo também o desvio gramatical apresentado:
"I'm looking forward to all the challenges and learnings that await me in the next years to come"
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Linkedin and resumés are a bit of a Pandora Box, when you learn the ropes they bring new ones to learn!
To my thinking "I'm looking forward to all the challenges and..." is fine, maybe it has become a bit cliché...
So: I am up to new challenges and new experiences (learnings is a no no, learning new things would be the case).
I am enthusiastic to learn and undertake new challenges...
I willing to learn new skills and undertake new challenges.
My choice of words was meant to more 'flexible' institutions, that would accept more colloquial language. To others you better stick to the 'beaten path' (a.k.a. "dip a toe in the water before you jump in.")
Okay, "learnings" can be pluralized, but in the corporate lingo, etc. I would say then that it is usually uncountable (as Wikidictionary points out as well).
To my thinking "I'm looking forward to all the challenges and..." is fine, maybe it has become a bit cliché...
So: I am up to new challenges and new experiences (learnings is a no no, learning new things would be the case).
I am enthusiastic to learn and undertake new challenges...
I willing to learn new skills and undertake new challenges.
My choice of words was meant to more 'flexible' institutions, that would accept more colloquial language. To others you better stick to the 'beaten path' (a.k.a. "dip a toe in the water before you jump in.")
Okay, "learnings" can be pluralized, but in the corporate lingo, etc. I would say then that it is usually uncountable (as Wikidictionary points out as well).
PPaulo,
Thank you for your kind participation so far. Besides, the highly predictable phrasal verb that was chosen, "looking forward to, " in this extract, there are two main points that deserve attention:
First, the use of phrasal verbs in formal texts, such as those from the business and academic worlds, should, when it is possible, be avoided. It should be replaced by words (verbs) more suitable to those environments, where written or spoken language tends to be more cultured and aimed at a globalized audience that includes many non-native speakers.
Second, in this short, simple phrase, there is a remarkably recurrent mistake in the English language (notably in formal writing), which must be corrected. It is, in fact, a grammatical deviation, also called "tautology."
Thank you for your kind participation so far. Besides, the highly predictable phrasal verb that was chosen, "looking forward to, " in this extract, there are two main points that deserve attention:
First, the use of phrasal verbs in formal texts, such as those from the business and academic worlds, should, when it is possible, be avoided. It should be replaced by words (verbs) more suitable to those environments, where written or spoken language tends to be more cultured and aimed at a globalized audience that includes many non-native speakers.
Second, in this short, simple phrase, there is a remarkably recurrent mistake in the English language (notably in formal writing), which must be corrected. It is, in fact, a grammatical deviation, also called "tautology."
Thank your for sharing your insights, your comments are much appreciated.
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