Correção de frases: ''I think that men, their responsibilities, etc''

Olá pessoal, Gostaria de saber se meu argumento têm problemas ortográficos, usei o translate, mas não consegui localizar nada.
Estudo sozinho e estou escrevendo sobre assuntos diversos.

I think that men feel pressured by society in general in order to lead.
Their responsibilities has been relacioned by positions of power and protect their family though.
I really don't think It's cool, because that situation building an oppressive sexist society that hang young boys.
It's necessary deconstruct these ideas.