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celmac
We are very grateful for your response. Yes, We want to work with you, Your area research will be essential to us, and your project is realy engaging.

We contact you because We are completly engaged in making a good work to develop our skills, experiences and new points of vision.

Oh, This is great , with a Brazilian pofessor our work will be more familiar and You will help us, making this work more productive.
We will be much happy working with you, but We need a Letter of Acceptance, with all your program details. And We want to take English classes apart to improve our english fluency.

So, for work with you we need a Letter of Acceptance, We are sending a model to you.
We are looking foward to your response.
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celmac
I change some points:
We are very grateful for your response. Yes, we want to work with you, your area research will be essential to us, and your project is realy engaging.
We contact you because we are completely committed to make a good work to develop our skills, experiences and new points of view.
Oh, This is great, with a Brazilian professor our work will be more familiar and you can help us to make our research more productive, it will be helpful! Speaking of that, we want to take English classes to improve our english fluency.
We will be much happy working with you, but we need a Letter of Acceptance, with all your program details.
Hoping to have the opportunity to work with you we are sending a model to you, since it is necessary a similar letter, you can modify this example changing the values and adding the tuition and fee adjustment, and your signature is indipensable.
We are looking foward to your response.

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Sugestões:
We are very grateful for your reply. Yes, we want to work with you, your area research will be essential to us, and your project is really engaging.
We contacted you because we are completely committed to doing a good job to develop our skills, experiences and new points of view.
This is great. With a Brazilian professor, our work will be more familiar and you can help us to make our research more productive. It will be helpful! Speaking of which, we want to take English classes to improve our English fluency.
We will be very happy working with you, but we need a Letter of Acceptance, with all your program details.
Hoping to have the opportunity to work with you, we are sending a model to you, since a similar letter is necessary, you can modify this example by changing the values and adding the tuition and fee adjustment, and your signature is indipensable.
We are looking foward to your reply.