Correção de texto: Who am I?

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Topic: Who am I?

Title: A some about me

My name is ........., I am .. years old and come from a humble family. I was born on April 2, 2000 in Guarulhos - SP, where I live up today with my parents, sister and grandmother.

Currently I am studying in the first year of high school and starting the second English course module at Wizard. I finished the second year of music theory and piano at Municipal Conservatory of Guarulhos. The music for me is a therapy and make it a hobby.

One of my dreams is to know the USA and maybe doing a interchange to improve my favorite language that is English.

I haven't decided yet about the higher education course, but I have a big admiration by administration and journalism. In my spare times I usually to play keyboard and guitar and I enjoy to stay with my family and friends. I also like to read and go to the gym.

I am determined and fight to achieve my dreams and objectives. I have facility to learn new things and I know dealing with different kinds of persons.

I transform obstacles into opportunities and give my best in everything I do.
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My name is ........., I am .. years old and come from a humble family. I was born on April 2, 2000 in Guarulhos - SP, where I live until today with my parents, sister and grandmother.

Currently I am an eleventh grader in high school and I am starting the second English course module at Wizard. I finished the second year of music theory and piano at Municipal Conservatory of Guarulhos. The music for me is a therapy and make it a hobby.

One of my dreams is to visit the USA and maybe go on an exchange program to improve my favorite language: English.

I haven't decided yet about my higher education course choice yet, but I have a strong admiration for administration and journalism. In my spare times I usually to play the keyboard and the guitar and I enjoy to stay staying with my family and friends. I also like to read and go to the gym.

I am determined and fight to achieve my dreams and objectives. I have facility to learn new things easily and I know dealing how to deal with different kinds of persons people.

I transform obstacles into opportunities and give my best in everything I do.
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Title: (a little) Something about me.

My name is Thalita, I am ...[1] years old and come from a humble family. I was born on April 2, 2000 in Guarulhos - SP, where I live with my parents, sister and grandmother up to now. (or to this day/until toda
y etc).


I am determined to achieve my goals and dreams, and I positively fight for them. I am a quick student and enthusiastic for learning new things.


This is just another way to say the same. Marcelo is really a on-the-ball guy, so there´s not much to suggest further.
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[1] I was born in 2000, do the maths, ha ha ha. I hope you have made up this date, since you were worried about privacy...