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Good evening,
Hi! My name’s Pedro and I am Brazilian. I’m a student too. I study at Instituto Federal de Educação, Ciência e Tecnologia da Bahia, in Salvador-BA. My best friend is Carol, and she studies with me. We live distant our family. I love English too, but I too would love to learn French, Deutsch and Latin. Nice meeting you.
Juliano.
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Hi! My name’s Pedro. I’m a student. I study at Instituto Federal de Educação, Ciência e Tecnologia da Bahia, in Salvador. My best friend is Carol, and she studies with me. We live apart from our family. I love English, but I would love to learn French, Deutsch and Latin too. Nice meeting you.
Juliano.

Unless you are writing to a foreign pen pal (or a pen friend), there is no need to mention that you are Brazilian.
The use of the adverb too in a sentence:
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/diction ... uguese/too
http://sentence.yourdictionary.com/too

We normally use the adjective apart+from when we want to say that we live in a different place from the person we have a close relationship. The word apart can also be an adverb:

http://dictionary.cambridge.org/diction ... tish/apart


Congratulations on your text. ;)
Avatar do usuário PPAULO 39175 6 32 684
Congrats on your spotless answer, Ana. You really has cut the mustard ! One interesting and tricky thing, was that JP seems like having tricked us into using other language than English there.
Interpersed within was "Deutch" I would rather use German, should we follow that standard we would say that she likes "français" (French in French), Deutch (German in German) and Linguae Latinae (Latin in Latin).
Just saying! just for amusement´s sake. Sorta. :P
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Paulo

Thanks for your keen observation!
I hadn’t noticed that the boy wrote in German. I guess it passed unnoticed.

Ich lerne Deutsch. ;)
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Don´t sweat the small stuff Ana, and everything is the small stuff.
My eye caught that on a cursory inspection, anyway no one would sue you or me if it passed unchecked, eh? The comment was just for fun, perhaps my eye for detail in German didn´t abandon me, sometime ago I tried some basic German, online, just for the kick of it...then the basic of the basics stuck somehow in my brain. Ha ha.
Indeed I am not the sharper knife on the drawer, as I said, it was out of habit, sorta.


Ich lerne auch Deutsch ein wenig. Danke!
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Good evening,

Hi! My name’s Pedro and I am A Brazilian STUDENT. I study at Instituto Federal de Educação, Ciência e Tecnologia da Bahia, in Salvador - BA. My best friend is Carol, and she studies with me.
We live FAR FROM our family. I love STUDYING English, but I ALSO would love to learn French, GERMAN and Latin LANGUAGE. Nice TO MEET you.
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German and Latin would do to me. It wouldn´t different if said in Latin itself. It worth noticing that that´s nothing wrong with "I love English" (one would assume that JP is talking about her studying tastes) and nothing wrong with either "I love studying/I love to study English".
http://www.inglesnapontadalingua.com.br ... doing.html

The highlighting of the points could be made by the site resources, say, by the font´s changing it to italics, bold or underlining the necessary words.
Many people use capitalizing as a way of meaning "yelling/crying" in chat rooms (and even in Message Boards or written texts), that´s why.
Thank you guys for your always handy contributions.