The world count was at 373 words as it originally was, at least wasn´t less than 250.
Here my first impressions, from a cursory reading and in passing. So, subject to fine-tuning. All comments to polish it are welcome.
You have to compare your version against mine, perhaps to print them or read the paragraphs side by side.
So, let´s go give it a stab!
My mother always told me that I was very creative and had a very particular interest on computers and general technology. I grew up with an extended access to computer and electronic resources and soon began to accept the love for science and engineering. I would leave your mom out of it, it may (or may not) think that you are kinda immature and stuck to your mom, clutching her skirt´s hem . I would redo it to:
I always was told that I am very creative and I do have a very particular interest on computers and general technology. Or... "that I am very good at computers and general technology" (which would be two different statements)
I grew up with constant access to computer and electronic resources and soon began to love science and engineering.
Currently , I am studying Electronic Engineering at the Federal University of Bahia and my main subject of interest are HPC (High Performance Computing), super-computing solutions, and its applications on 3D Rendering and CAE.
I always dreamed of learning how to develop electronic devices and computational hardware to assist gamers, video makers, engineers and everyone that needs extreme processing performance. There is no better place to learn how to develop these kinds of technologies than in the USA, especially in California.
In the last 5 years I began to do some real work in the field of 3D design, video production, CAD, CAE, CAM, photo-realistic rendering and built more than 60 high-end computer machines over the last 2 years.
I attended as a speaker and guest consultant a variety of advanced computer technology events/workshops. To cite a few: Eletrolar 2012 & 2013 (the largest consumer electronics show for the industry and retail of Latin America); Handyshow 2009 to 2013 (the biggest computer technology event in the north and northeast regions of Brazil), BGS (Brazil Game Show). More often than not, I have worked with high performance devices and new technologies like CUDA from NVidia and multi-processors compact super machines. I have a special line of High-End computers with my online gaming nickname called ArTTech that will soon be coming to Brazil’s stores.
I am also a coach and consultant for high frequency solid-state memories, the ones developed by Kingston. I am the captain of a Formula SAE team (Kamikaze Racing Team) on my university UFBA (Federal University of Bahia) in which I have developed a telemetry solution based on computer technology, provided by Intel and Fueltech, my current sponsors.
[perhaps, there´s not a link between the fact of being the captain of the race team and the solution you found, maybe the link is the "telemetry" (I think), perhaps would be a good idea to stablish the link by
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Artificial Intelligent devices, computer-aided tasks, and human-machine interfaces are also fields of study I am interested to learn and develop with US students. Given its importance to extend our limited biological capabilities. The future holds not just multi-core cellphones, but a combination between biological and computer “architectures”, and this may define people’s lives in the near future.