Correção Essay para programa Ciências sem Fronteiras [2]

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To choose my preferences of institutions, I used as the main point the similarity of the disciplines with those on my university. The University of Wisconsin - Madison is my first choice because it has a very similar study program with the one of my university, and research groups in the field of study that currently research. Another reason is that I assist a professor on his research and he obtained his PhD there, he recommended this university because, on his view, it has the profile that I am looking for. The University of Wisconsin-Madison also has a lot of courses about Power and Energy Systems, my favorite field in electrical engineering.
My second choice is the University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign. This university has been in collaboration agreement with my university, which means that the courses that I take there will be added to my academic transcript in my university. The University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign also has several laboratories for practical classes that do not exist in my university and would be very useful for my learning to have contact with such equipment. This university has a research program similar to the one I develop on my university. This contact could help a lot to advance my research when I come back.
The Ohio State University is my third option, this university also has a filiation with my university many years and so it is a good option. This university has a research program about Renewable Energy and I think this a fascinating topic.
Yours Faithfully,
Guilherme Dantas de Freitas


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