Amigos, Estou aplicando a seguinte carta para o CSF, com o objetivo de ir aos EUA.
Gostaria de saber a opinião de vocês, baseado em experiencias culturais e conhecimento de normas da língua inglesa.
Alguma sugestão para eliminar as palavras repetidas?
Study Objectives: In an essay of no less than 250 words and no more than 500 words, write a clear and detailed description of your study objectives. Be specific about your field of study and your specialized interests within this field.
I always knew where I wanted to go and had my objectives clearly and organized in mind. I made a point of getting involved in various projects, seeking a comprehensive knowledge and opportunity to apply them. Unfortunately I did not have all features and conditions to make possible to develop some ideas, however, never failed me creativity to solve them.
University is not just a place where we only to attend classes, conduct evaluations, and nothing more. I believe that this is an environment for research, development, study and where you can put into practice projects with potential for technological innovation, finally, feeding back society that invests in each student.
I'm apply for this exchange program, because I seek a workspace of knowledge development and implement training that already has begun, through opportunities that could never have in Brazil. Engineering is a scientific field intimately connected to life, is the basis of technological innovation and progress in many varied sectors. It's meaningless if you can't apply real innovation technologies to help real people. Find real applications on what I learn in the classroom, always served as my motivation. Because of that, I would like to continue and improve my projects, in the USA.
Efficient use of energy has played a special area of study for me, and the use of automatic, mechanical, electrical or computing solutions to such. Doing more with less is definitely my bet for the future. I am currently the leader of the drivetrain system on a formula SAE race team, at my university, and believe that this is an area of the automotive industry that stands out because of promising, related to reducing fuel consumption and sustainability. There is huge potential for savings through automated solutions or transmission, continuously variable transmission (CVT), resizing of gear,s or even others revolutionaries ones.
Another topic that I research, has application in several modes of transportation, such as aviation and automotive. I am a private airplane pilot, and got within the last years, a huge specific knowledge about the area. Through sensors, it is possible to increase the efficiency of these modes and especially bringing more security to the users, avoiding major accidents such have happened worldwide.
Computing has always been another major goal of my study. I'm especially interested in the development of embedded devices. I Participate in programming competitions in my country, giving me some comfort with the #C language and the Linux operating system. I created a project for my university, reducing the waiting time of vehicles, fuel consumption, and increased well being. In addition, I am a student of scientific initiative, at the artificial vision lab where I develop the hardware for biometric sensors.
The future is made today. I'm a knowledge seeker and I'm bring many experiences I have gained in my home country. As a future Automation and Control Engineer I would like to be well-prepared to the future.