Correção de frases do inglês básico

Hello everbody!!!

Someone can correct these sentences for me?

Please, where are you from?
What time is it, please?
I'm sorry, but I win!
I'm sorry, can you say that again?

Thank you.
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Avatar do usuário Artful Dodger 4500 6 13 103
Hello, Renan,

All the sentences are correct, depending on the context you use them.
However, you don't need to say 'sorry' in every sentence to sound polite. Here follow a few alternatives:

Excuse me, where are you from?
May I ask you what time it is?
Excuse me, could you say that again?

Cheers!
Avatar do usuário PPAULO 39195 6 32 684
"I'm sorry, but I win!"

Indeed I thought he was being sarcastic with a weaker player/opponent, and was certain that he was going to win.
Sometimes a word (here: sorry) may have the opposite effect.