Correção de frases do inglês básico

Hello everbody!!!

Someone can correct these sentences for me?

Please, where are you from?
What time is it, please?
I'm sorry, but I win!
I'm sorry, can you say that again?

Thank you.

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2 respostas
Artful Dodger 6 14 102
Hello, Renan,

All the sentences are correct, depending on the context you use them.
However, you don't need to say 'sorry' in every sentence to sound polite. Here follow a few alternatives:

Excuse me, where are you from?
May I ask you what time it is?
Excuse me, could you say that again?

PPAULO 6 48 1.1k
"I'm sorry, but I win!"

Indeed I thought he was being sarcastic with a weaker player/opponent, and was certain that he was going to win.
Sometimes a word (here: sorry) may have the opposite effect.