Correção de frases com inglês básico

Boa tarde galera
Estou estudando inglês pela internet gratuitamente aprendendo como autodidata, penso em fazer um curso ano que vem em uma escola renomada ou talvez um curso online pois quero um dia fazer intercambio fora do país.
Criei dois diálogos básicos de palavras que sei e não usei nenhuma ferramenta de tradução, usei apenas meu "little" conhecimento em inglês e muita imaginação. gostaria que me dissessem se há algo de errado ou algum erro gramatical.
Segue os diálogos:

Two students of the interchange in Canadian.

Mark - Hellow! Do you speak English?

Luke - Hi! A little, but not very well.

Mark - Where are you from?

Luke - I from in Brazilian, and you?

Mark - I from American.

Luke - How long have been here?

Mark - Two weeks.

Luke - Do you like Canadian?

Mark - Yes, I Do.

Luke - With what you work?

Mark - I am Teacher of the music

Luke - Oh my God, i love music

Mark - And you? With what you work?

Luke - I am engineer. But music is my life.

Mark - Nice to meet you.

Luke - Nice to meet you to. Good luck with yours stdents. Don't is easy.

Mark - Thank you, Don't is easy but is good, i love music.

Luke - I can imagine.

Mark - Bye

Luke - Bye, Bye


Second Dialogue

Mariah - Hi Kevin.

Kevin - Hi Mariah

Mariah - How are you doing?

Kevin - Not very weel.

Mariah - Because?

Kevin - My father died today

Mariah - I'm sorry, you are not alone.

Kevin - Thank you Mariah.

Mariah - You have friends, family, people what you love.

Kevin - Truth, I have to go, bye.

Mariah - Bye, bye, God Bless


Eu sei que é muito básico para muito de vocês aqui, mas quem puder me dar uma força e um feed back, eu agradeço.
Nos estudos o mais importante é o estímulo e estou muito empolgado.

Abraços a todos.
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Sugestões de correção:

Mark - Hello! Do you speak English?

Luke - Hi! A little, but not very well.

Mark - Where are you from?

Luke - I'm from Brazil, and you?

Mark - I'm from Canada.

Luke - How long have you been here?

Mark - Two weeks.

Luke - Do you like Canada?

Mark - Yes, I do.

Luke - What do you do?

Mark - I teach music.

Luke - Oh my God, I love music

Mark - And you? What do you do?

Luke - I am an engineer but music is my life.

Mark - Nice to meet you.

Luke - Nice to meet you too. Good luck with your students. It's not easy.

Mark - Thank you. It's not easy but it is good. I love music.

Luke - I can imagine.

Mark - Bye

Luke - Bye, Bye


Second Dialogue

Mariah - Hi Kevin.

Kevin - Hi Mariah

Mariah - How are you doing?

Kevin - Not very well.

Mariah - Why?

Kevin - My father died today

Mariah - I'm sorry, you are not alone.

Kevin - Thank you, Mariah.

Mariah - You have friends, family and people you love.

Kevin - It's true. I have to go. bye.

Mariah - Bye, bye, God Bless
donay mendonça

Thank you, some mistakes were but others were writing and grammar correction helped me a lot.
Thank you
You're on right track!
A tip: use and abuse of the online dictionary and google translator. It helps to write and to speak correctly.