Correção de texto: Diet makes people fat

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Diet makes people fat

I agree that diet makes people fat. It's true that making a diet you can lose weight very fast. The problem is when you finish the diet. The abstinence of food makes people eat more. So, in few days, you can get a weight higher than that you have in the begining of the diet.

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Dieting makes people fat

I agree that dieting makes people fat. It's true that going on a diet can make you lose weight very fast. However, the problem is when you finish the diet: after being on food abstinence, people eat more. So, in a few days, you can find yourself weighing more than you did in the beginning of the diet.

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