Correção de texto: It wasn't my idea

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It wasn't my idea

In my parents' house there is a balcony that I used to play in when a was a child. One day, a friend had the brilliant idea of throwing objects in the people who are passing below the balcony. Of course, they became very angry with us but we continued until one of them decided to ring the house bell and talk with my parents. No good to say it wasn't my idea. I had to stay a week without TV and videogame.
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To me, "that I used to play when a was a child." would do.

...idea of throwing objects into people who were passing below the balcony (or "below it").


No good to say it wasn't my idea.
It was no use saying it wasn´t my idea. OR
I said it wasn´t my idea, but it was no use.



I had to stay a week without TV and videogame.
I was ground for a week without any TV or videogames.
(Here just another way to say the same thing, I thought you should find it interesting to know. Not a correction at all, okay? it should keep it as it is.)