Correção de texto: "Learning English Journal"

MGSilva 245 5
This is my learning English journal that I’ve decided to create to improve my writing skill, speaking skill and vocabulary, in addition to my ability of thinking in English. I struggle to think and speak directly in English. I commit a lot of grammar and pronounce mistakes and I miss words that I want to express myself. I guess that I am at pre-intermediate level when it comes to read or listen to in English, but when I try to speak and write I feel like a absolute beginner learner.

It’s very hard writing one single paragraph in English. My native language gets in the way, my sentences sounds unnatural and very weird. I’ve been searching for ways to overcome these barriers. One of the ways that I’ve found was write a journal. This way I can visualise what I need to improve.
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Leonardo96 4300 9 97
Minhas sugestões de correção estão em caps Lock, sejam elas correções de erros de gramática ou outras maneiras que pensei soar mais natural e adequado.

This is my "Learning English" journal that I’ve decided to create to improve my writing SKILLS, speaking SKILLS and vocabulary, in addition to my ability of thinking in English. I struggle to think and speak directly in English. I MAKE a lot of grammar and PRONUNCIATION mistakes and I CAN'T THINK OF THE words I want to express. I guess that I am at pre-intermediate level when it comes to READING or LISTENING TO English, but when I try to speak and write I feel like AN absolute BEGINNING/ROOKIE learner.

It’s very hard TO WRITE one single paragraph in English. My native language gets in the way, my sentences SOUND unnatural and very weird. I’ve been LOOKING for ways to overcome these OBSTACLES. One of the IDEAS that I’ve COME UP WITH is WRITING a journal. This ALLOWS ME to visualise what I need to improve.

Redseahorse 13345 2 20 273
Parabéns, abaixo minhas sugestões já alteradas no texto.

This is my English learning journal that I've decided to create to improve my writing and speaking skills, and also my vocabulary, enhancing my thinking ability in the English language. I struggle to think and speak preferably in English, I still make a lot of grammar and pronunciation mistakes and I miss words that I want to express my thoughts and ideas.
When it comes to reading or listening in English, I guess that I am at the pre-intermediate level, but when I try speaking and writing, I feel like an absolute beginner learner.
It's just very hard to write a single paragraph in English because my native language gets in the way, my sentences seem unnatural and weird. I've been searching for ways to overcome these barriers and, one of the ways that I've found was to write a journal. With this learning approach, I can realize what I need to improve.

MGSilva 245 5
Gostei das correções de vocês.

Thank you very much!