Seu texto está muito bom. Irei apenas sugerir algumas alterações:
Directed by Shawn Levy and written by Vince Vaughn and Jared Stern, ''The Internship'' is the story of two salesmen who, after being fired from their jobs, they see each other trying to get hired by Google.
The movie is set in the United States at Google's headquarters, in Silicon Valley. Billy and Nick are friends and work together selling watches for (a company called) Bill Sale company. After a real shock involving the company's sales, computers and future, they suddenly get fired.
Vince's girlfriend leaves him and his house goes into foreclosure, while Nick receives an opportunity to work for his sister's husband in a mattress store.
Billy has an idea and goes to Nick's workplace to tell him that he has enrolled both in an online course and also booked a job interview at Google. Nick leaves his job and goes with Billy.
The job interview occurs in a public library. Despite having a funny and confusing online interview, they are both accepted in the end.
A volleyball court, free food, a high-tech building and a lot of ''geeks'', this is how we can describe Google's (workplace) environment.
At the work rules meeting, they are introduced to the Indian boss, the lady that Nick falls in love with and the group of young managers.
In the beginning the geeks don't like working with them, but as the tests proceed, they realize that Billy and Nick are important to the team and a true friendship begins.
With the team working together, they fight against the British team. On the last test, Billy uses his sales skills to help the team.
In the end, all of them are hired.
I strongly reccomend this movie because it is a guarantee that you're going to laugh a lot.
1) Alterei os tempos verbais para o presente para mantê-los consistentes. Optei pelo presente pois o mesmo é mais comum em reviews de filmes.
2) "Mortgage" é o financiamento de um imóvel propriamente dito. "Foreclosure" é a execução do bem.