Correção de Texto:Transgenic Organisms: Problem or solution?

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Science has brought a series of opportunities when we are talking about improvements on productivity. One of these new opportunities is related to the production of transgenic organisms that are genetically modified. This technique has brought also a series of questions.
The first big problem about transgenic organisms is that we don't know for sure what are the effects they have in our bodies. Some people say that our bodies would see these modified organisms as strange beings, and would attack them, causing problems like cancer.
Those who defend the use of modified organisms, on the other hand, say that they are our best choice when it comes to increasing the levels of production of food. These people claim that without this option, we wouldn't be able to feed our population.
Considering both sides, we can see that this question requires patience and precaution. We have to take in account the problem of the lack of food, but we also need more information about genetic modified organisms before adopting this solution.
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Science has brought a series of opportunities when we are talking about improvements on productivity. One of these new opportunities is related to the production of transgenic organisms that are genetically modified. This technique has also brought also a series of questions.
The first big problem about transgenic organisms is that we don't know for sure what are the effects they have in our bodies. Some people say that our bodies would see these modified organisms as strange beings, and would attack them, causing problems like cancer.
Those who defend the use of modified organisms, on the other hand, say that they are our best choice when it comes to increasing the levels of production of food. These people claim that without this option, we wouldn't be able to feed our population.
Considering both sides, we can see that this question requires patience and precaution. We have to take into account the problem of the lack of food, but we also need more information about genetic modified organisms before adopting this solution.