Correções de Textos: Inside the bus

Avatar do usuário Lucas PAYNE 260 7
Everyday I need to take a bus to go to my job, but I can't never go sitting because the bus is always crowded.
Sometimes I arrived in my job very tired because have so much traffic on the way and I stand inside the bus with a very heavy backpack.
The thing is that I have no choice because when I'm going with my car I spend time in traffic too.
Definitely I'm curious about how the traffic will work in the world cup.

Desde já meu muito obrigado.
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Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 52185 21 84 1222
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Everyday, I need to take a bus to work, but I can't sit down because the bus is always crowded.
Sometimes, I arrive at work very tired because there is so much traffic on the way and I stand inside the bus with a very heavy backpack.
The thing is that I have no choice because when I go by car I spend a lot of time stuck in traffic too.
Definitely, I'm curious about what traffic will be like during the World Cup.
Avatar do usuário Lucas PAYNE 260 7
Muito Obrigado Donay.