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Olá, boa noite !

Escrevi esse e-mail porém vi que repeti muitas vezes o pronome "we". Gostaria de saber como posso evitá-lo e tbm se o texto está redigido corretamente. Thank you !

"Hello Marianna,
Our holidays were crazy, you lost ! I, Mike and Susan went to Las Vegas by plane (It takes about 10 hours and 38 minutes). We were staying at the hotel "Downtown Grand Las Vegas" which had a very affordable price of U $$ 62.38 per night. Unfortunately the hotel room was a bit dusty and I had some allergy, but nothing too. The weather was horrible, raining and very cold and we had just taken shirts and shorts kkkkkkk. We bought some warm clothes and we went to the craziest parties of our lives. The Worst of all, after drinking too much, we got lost and didn’t know come back to hotel hahaha Lucky that we had a card from there and we delivered it to the first taxi that we saw. After we having enjoyed almost all bars and casinos of city, we went to the airport for come back to home and there, the unexpected happened: I had lost my wallet with my documents and passport. Almost went crazy! We missed the flight (postpone it for the next day) and had to go police for record the incident. After that, we went to the consulate for generate another passport, which luckily was done on the same day, because I had a photocopy of the original, which sped up the process. Finally, in the next day we come back to home and when we arrived, a surprise: Inside of the Mike’s suitcase was my wallet with passport. I didn’t know whether to laugh or cry kkkkkkk I Just know that the trip was unforgettable and we’ll keep it for the rest of our life."