Correção de texto: Cover letter II

Dear Hiring Manager,

I intend to develop a professional career in the maritime cruise sector.
I would like to apply for the role of _
Although I do not have proven experience in this area, I have a lot of willpower to learn.
With good communication skills and a passion for quality customer service, I consider myself to possess the key elements for good performance.
I am quick to learn new skills.
I look forward to discussing my professional resume with you, at an interview.
Thank you for your time and consideration

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Dear Hiring Manager,

I intend to develop a professional career in the maritime cruise sector.
I would like to apply for the role of _
Although I do not have proven experience in this area, I have much willpower to learn.
With excellent communication skills and a passion for quality customer service, I consider myself to possess the critical elements for good performance.
I am quick to learn new skills.
I look forward to discussing my professional resume with you, at an interview.
Thank you for your time and consideration
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Dear Hiring Manager,

I am writing to apply for the position of (advertised at...- say where - a folder, a paper/magazine...)

For the time being, and I gave it just a cursory reading, it´s what catches my eye. Let´s wait for more comments.