Correção de texto "In the morning..."

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In the morning, Taylor was at home. He waked up earlier, because it was the day of the trip. He and Lisa were agreed about this trip and she´ll arrive at 9:00 a.m. Therefore Taylor arranged all your baggage and he was waiting near the door. At last, Lisa came for him. So, read the next dialogue:

Lisa: Hi, Taylor! How are you?
Taylor: Hey, I´am good! How about you?
Lisa: I´m really fine, thanks. Do you want a help to take this baggage?
Taylor: Of course not! My baggage isn´t weighty.
Lisa: Ok! So, enter into the car.
Taylor: Sure! Let´s go!
Editado pela última vez por Donay Mendonça em 14 Jan 2011, 10:39, em um total de 2 vezes.
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Donay Mendonça 58030 22 97 1386
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In the morning, Taylor was at home. He woke up earlier because it was the day of the trip. He and Lisa had agreed on this trip and she would arrive at 9:00 a.m, so Taylor packed his things and waited by the door. At last, Lisa came to him. So, read the next dialogue:

Lisa: Hi, Taylor! How are you?
Taylor: Hey, I´am good! How about you?
Lisa: I´m just fine, thanks. Do you want help to take this baggage?
Taylor: Of course not! My baggage isn´t heavy.
Lisa: Ok! So, get into the car.
Taylor: Sure! Let´s go!


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