Correção de texto "My christmas"

I wrote this little text, please help me you guys.

"In my christmas I woke up early, I don't remember why. It's sunny and I'm happy just hanging out with my family. It's was great. The christmas dinner was slap-up, I binged on food XD. I spoke with my friends on the phone to wish a merry christmas. So this was the christmas that I won't forget"

Thanks for all
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Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 49075 21 73 1138
Wellington,

Sugestões de melhoria para seu texto:

"At christmas I woke up early, I don't remember why. It was sunny and I was happy just hanging out with my family. It was great. There was a slap-up Christmas dinner, I binged on food. I spoke with my friends on the phone to wish them a merry Christmas. So this was the christmas that I won't forget."


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Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 49075 21 73 1138
Para complementar, eu sugiro o uso de "on Christmas day [no dia de Natal]" no lugar de "at Christmas".


Boa sorte!
Muito obrigado Donay Mendonça, ajudou muito :D

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Avatar do usuário Never Land 45
Como ficaria a tradução de:

" There was a slap-up Christmas dinner, I binged on food. "

Desde já,
Thanks
Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 49075 21 73 1138
Never Land,

There was a slap-up Christmas dinner, I binged on food.
Houve uma grande ceia de Natal, eu comi até não poder mais.


Bons estudos!