Correção de texto: Toefl (Reading Passage)

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The movie Gone with the wind was very important in the period which was made, gaining an Academic Award. The writing section suggest racisms acts was in the movie and the Listening part is against this thinking.

First of all, for lecture, the movie was over statated and showed, clearly, the limited opportunity for women after civil war and the changes that happened after this period of the history.The charactor who interprateted Mammy, in the lecture, was dignit and interpratetd really well , giving the opportunity to be the first African who won an Award. The reading passage just highlighted the fact the character do not had a first name in the script.

Second, the lecture said that Butterfly McQueen, did more than just a "histerical performance" like wrotten in the text. She showed the unhappiness and the fact she do not like to be a slave. It is important remember which, the movie provided jobs opportunites to black characters and "opened" spaces for more movies like that.

So, although the lecture and the text disagree in some points, they agree in one thing: The movie industry got an big step with the movie Gone with the Wind.
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Se não me engano, Gone With The Wind escreve-se com iniciais maiúsculas.

"... do not had" ler-se-ia "... do not have"
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The movie - Gone With the Wind, was very important in the period WHEN IT was PRODUCED, gaining an Academic Award. The writing section SUGGESTS RACISM acts WERE in the movie and the Listening part is against this THOUGHT.

First of all, for THE COMMENTATOR, the movie was OVERSTATED and IT showed, clearly, the limited OPPORTUNITIES for women after civil war and the changes that happened after this period of the history.The ACTRESS who INTERPRETED THE CHARACTER Mammy in the FILM, was PROPER and DID IT really well, IT GAVE HER the opportunity to be the first African TO WIN an Award. The reading passage just highlighted the fact OF the character DOES not HAVE HER first name in the script.

Second, the COMMENTATOR said that Butterfly McQueen, did more than just a "HYSTERICAL performance" AS IT IS WRITTEN in the text. She showed HER unhappiness FOR the fact she DID not like to be a slave. It is important TO remember THAT, the movie provided JOB OPPORTUNITIES to black ACTORS and "opened" SPACE for more movies like that.


So, although the COMMENTATOR and the text disagree in some points, they agree in one thing: The movie industry TOOK A big step with the movie " Gone With The Wind ".


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