Correção do texto em inglês: Some Brazilian problems

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Some brazilian problems

Although Brazil have been improved its social condition, there are a lot of problems that still remain: unemployment, violence, crime, polution, lack of health, poor education, social inequality, etc. However, the problem which more bother me is the poor education. In my opinion, the key to solve the most of this problems is to improve the education in Brazil.
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Avatar do usuário Marcio_Farias 12350 1 22 206
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Although Brasil has improved... ( o been não cabe aqui)
Avatar do usuário Rodzilla 30
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"the problem which more bother me", should be: "the problem that bothers me the most"
Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 49085 21 73 1138
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Although Brazil has improved its social condition, there are a lot of problems that still remain: unemployment, violence, crime, pollution, a bad health care system, poor education, social inequality, etc. However, the problem which most bothers me is poor education. In my opinion, the key to solve most of these problems is to improve education in Brazil.


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Avatar do usuário draylson 15
Thanks! :-)