Correção de texto: Environmental Problems
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Humans and technology are evolving very fast, but we keep don’t giving a f*ck to our “house” and polluting it as we had two or three Earth’s. The question is that we are developing many technologies to make our everyday life easier, but without thought to the consequences our actions will take. The greenhouse effect and their effects on global warming are worsted by human’s actions, like cut many trees down, industrial waste and the increases of polluting gases. This make the increase of global temperature, polar defrosting and rising sea levels. We need to reduce our emission of atmospheric CO2 , use renewable sources of energy, replant trees, avoid wasting energy and reduce the expense of energy in our houses. Other problem that cause a lot of damage and is harmful to our environmental is the deforestation. It is responsible for the extinction of many species of plants and animals, the soil erosion and water pollution. Caused by the unstoppable need to use unrenewable sources to produce more energy to “feed” our technology. However, this do more harm than good, and in the long run we’ll notice how we’re being stupid in prioritizing the technology. Therefore, we need to be aware of our actions and change our opinions and ourselves while we still have time.
Humans and technology are evolving very fast, but we keep don’t giving a f*ck to our “house” and polluting it as we had two or three Earth’s. The question is that we are developing many technologies to make our everyday life easier, but without thought to the consequences our actions will take. The greenhouse effect and their effects on global warming are worsted by human’s actions, like cut many trees down, industrial waste and the increases of polluting gases. This make the increase of global temperature, polar defrosting and rising sea levels. We need to reduce our emission of atmospheric CO2 , use renewable sources of energy, replant trees, avoid wasting energy and reduce the expense of energy in our houses. Other problem that cause a lot of damage and is harmful to our environmental is the deforestation. It is responsible for the extinction of many species of plants and animals, the soil erosion and water pollution. Caused by the unstoppable need to use unrenewable sources to produce more energy to “feed” our technology. However, this do more harm than good, and in the long run we’ll notice how we’re being stupid in prioritizing the technology. Therefore, we need to be aware of our actions and change our opinions and ourselves while we still have time.
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