Hi Andrea, nice to have you onboard.
The text is good as it is, such a pity it is taken from Wikipedia and you have failed to cite that! More so when the text comes to the section of ''correction of texts
Since Google and others search engines are tightening up the rules on plagiarism, they don´t accept major pieces of ipsis litteris citations.
Any text of your own are accepted, appreciated, and certainly will be commented about. Thanks for your participation. You are welcome.seja-um-moderador-voluntario-do-ee-t19419-10.html