Correção de Redação para entrevista

Olá Pessoal,

Tenho uma entrevista de estágio nos próximos dias e gostaria que alguém avaliasse minha redação.


I will told a little of my life , my experiences in others Companies, my future perspective and why I choiced the engineering program.
I live with my parents and my sisters in SBC city. The interest for study engineering started when I was a child because I always identify me with the occupation, and there is a shortage of skilled labor.
First of all, I have a certificated in Mechatronic where I got my first intern. My probation period in Multinacional Company cooperated with my development. I had became a person responsible, have learned in teamwork. I have had opportunities for work with good professional who were always willing help me.
My future expectatives is keep yourself updated and command of english language.
I hope to be engaged because I think in grow in the Company and to achieve positive results.