This movie was extraordinarily
wonderful( ), I much preffer the like the old ones (old versions of it)/I like the old ones.
I used to watch J
ark with my dad when I was a kid.
I used to watch time and again
(many times, here) /with interest
[both ways -in bold- I would use, instead of "endless"], in different senses, of course.
the histories [scripts? plots?] of the movies are scientifically perfect. The one launched this year really get us moved/touched, there is a part in wich a D
iplodocus dinosaur is dying because of the creation of the (first ever) transgenic dinosaur, a strain that is a cross between the V
elociraptor and a T
That was really a sad scene I got so moved to the point of almost crying (or that I almost cried), I love animals and I'm really emotionaly
sensitive when it comes to their well-being/the importance of their lives, and the special effects were very convincing, indeed. Unfortunately
many dinosaurs died/perished, but the end of the movie was awesome. The Velociraptors were very loyal to their
against the transgenic ones; then the T-Rex joined the fight against the transgenic dinosaurs as well, they were losing
but the sea dinosaur took the transgenic one, and eventually drowned her.
I loved the actors of this movie and the history, I am a undergraduate student of biology myself and I want also to become paleontologist.
Thank you guys for
me, you can see that I need some help. (or - you can see that I really needed some help with my writing.)
This is just a kick-off, a draft, I meant to give some ideas and dealt with some topics (grammar/more natural ways etc).
More comments and corrections are expected and welcome.