Correção de texto em inglês - Democracy

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Democracy

Democracy is a government system which the decisions are made for the people. Each person gives his vote that expresses his opinion. The most voted opinion is taken and performed. At the first moment, to apply democracy seems to be the most reasonable option to perform group decisions. However, the problem is that there will always be group's members insatisfied about the elected decision. In my opinion, sometimes, to try a consensus is better than to apply democracy. Althrough the members wouldn't be totaly satisfied, everyone would agree about the decision.
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Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 52185 21 84 1222
Sugestões para um trecho.

''Democracy is a government system in which the decisions are made for the people. Everyone gives their vote expressing their opinions. The most voted opinions are the accepted ones.''
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Thanks! :-)