Correção de texto em inglês: The Peace

Avatar do usuário draylson 15
The Peace

Usually, when someone asks about what you need to be happy, the frequent answer is about money or something you could buy with it. In my opinion, peace is the key for happiness. I think money can bring some happiness, but if you have a lot of money and don't have peace, it's impossible you be happy.
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draylson escreveu:(Remover "The") Peace

Usually, when someone asks (remover "about") what you need to be happy, the frequent answer is (remover "about") money or something you could buy with it. In my opinion, peace is the key for happiness (é correto, mas "the key to happiness" é mais comum). I think money can bring some happiness, but if you have a lot of money and don't have peace, it's impossible for you to be happy.
Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 49095 21 73 1138
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Usually, when someone asks you what you need to be happy, a frequent answer is money or something you could buy with it. In my opinion, peace is the key to happiness. I think money can bring some happiness, but if you have a lot of money and don't have any peace, it's impossible for you to be happy.
Avatar do usuário draylson 15
Thanks donay! Thanks Sra Tradutora! :-)